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I decided to review the Mizu Mizu no Mi on the urging of a close friend of mine. The Mizu Mizu no Mi allows the user to manipulate and become water, which is frankly a talent that goes against the pre-set rules of the One Piece universe. See, a Devil Fruit user will never be able to swim, the sea rejecting them completely. In fact, a material called sea stone (it has the essence of the sea) is used to restrain pirates with Devil Fruit powers. Logically, the Mizu Mizu no Mi should therefore be non-existent because water cannont drown water. I have seen several horrible stories with a person who had such power and they all were dreadful. Goo

So, I wrote a thesis for you guys about the dangers of the Pokémon world when applied to practical life. However, my phone glitched and all of my thesis was lost. To make up for that error, here are some ideas for writing. 1. Spelling and grammar are your best tools! You wouldn't not use your best tools, would you? Use them right! Don't write like you would text (unless your texts aren't full of abbreviations and bad capitalization and punctuation). Instead, write properly. Try not to spell bad. 2. Your hero must have flaws. In other words, your hero can't be a Mary Sue or Gary Stu. They must have reasonable flaws and not too many powe